CaitE Baloney

I have this problem a lot. What I feel helps is to pretend that this is your job and thus you must do it to get your pay check, or ...

Wow, I have to try using this more often. It makes things sound so much better. Thanks

I think that it wouldn't be the best idea to start with the last book although it wouldn't hurt to write down the most important things that would happen so ...

Hey, I thought this was a pretty good chapter, though I wish there was more to it. However I know it takes a lot of time to write a story ...

I have a horrendous time picking out names, although last names seem to be easier for me now. What I usually do is pick out two objects or things and ...

Maybe you should put it down for a while don't even think about it. After a few weeks (or more) come back to it and you should have a new ...

Wow I liked that. It puts a new perspective on how you might look at things and since nobody really see's the queen's side of things it is different. It ...

Well most of the critique has already been done but I just want to add that I really enjoyed reading this. I liked that you described everything in detail however ...

Hi, Okay I liked that. It was pretty good. The only big this that I have to say is that maybe you should mention her name before he says it. ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem. I really like your idea's that you put into this and it truely captures a good image. The only thing that I would have ...

That was pretty good I did notice a few other things in there that I think that you could fix. The doctors at the doctor’s office were never surprised to ...

Wow that was really great. I haven't really been on this site all that often lately so I haven't read anything in a while from here. Now more about you ...

Wow that was really great. I haven't really been on this site all that often lately so I haven't read anything in a while from here. Now more about you ...

I liked this a ton. I would definatly read the other parts. Of course everyone has already said everything that I have wanted, so keep up the good work and ...

This was a really good start, or middle, I really don't know what part of the story this is but it all has a ton of action in it so ...